We are involved in the Get NZ writing and we are writing poems based on William Carlos Williams poem its just to say .
Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Monday, March 2, 2020
This is just to say
We are involved in the Get NZ writing and we are writing poems based on William Carlos Williams poem its just to say .
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To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
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Kia Ora Jhana, its Jess. I have actually have done a couple naughty things, what about you have you done any other things that were bad, if so what were they? Maybe next time you could describe more about the poem, and what you had to do to create it. Over all i think it was a brilliant poem, and can´t wait to see your next blog post.
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